"Welp, what better place to gather constructive criticism than and entire website with a wide range of people?" I thought totally not sarcastically (honest), so why not? I will add mine as soon as I find a copy of it, since it was printed out for homework, and since I am on holiday, as well as being no where near my actual computer. But you do have my word that I will post it, I am not embarrassed of it.
But for the time being, share your knowledge that was created via, according to my captcha "time and paper", so no pens or pencils!